Review of “Amortals” by Matt Forbeck

AmortalsDRAFT-front-72dpi-186x300Full disclosure: I’ve had a couple of drinks with Matt in the past. However, I paid for my own copy of this book.

(Yes, another review. What can I say? I had some time to get some reading done over vacation. And I picked up Amortals about the same time as In Hero Years…I’m Dead. So, naturally, I had to read them one right after the other as well.)

Amortals is about a Secret Service agent who is part of the Amortals Program. When he dies, his clone is activated with his last backed-up memories. This time, he’s sent to investigate his own murder, which is particularly gruesome and shocking. I found the premise similar to how clones work in the fiction of EVE Online, which is what initially interested me in the book, but I quickly got swept up in the action movie premise. Over time, the book throws you a few curves, and near the end there’s some good digging into the moral implications and concerns of a society that clones the rich and powerful on a regular basis.

Like In Hero Years, there’s an afterword in which Matt talks about the process of writing the novel. He says he’s shopped around a draft of this in various forms for fifteen years, and I think that shows in the book. Whereas Mike’s book was a fountain of exploratory writing that focused on character emotion, this is a manuscript that has been revised and polished and tweaked for maximum effect, and the plot is highly tuned as a result. I don’t think one style is better than the other, but reading them back to back did give me an appreciation of how each approach creates a different style of narrative.

Matt is at the top of his game in creating a fun and engaging story. If you like action thrillers, this is a good book to pick up.

Review of “In Hero Years…I’m Dead”

IHY512Full Disclosure: I have met Mike Stackpole professionally a couple of times. I paid for this book myself, and wasn’t compensated in any way for it.

I’ve been a fan of Mike Stackpole’s since I read his Fiddleback trilogy of novels. When I saw him post on his Twitter that he was releasing a new digital direct-to-reader novel, I was interested. When I discovered he called it “superhero noir,” I purchased it right away — the first time I made an impulse purchase on an ebook novel. I was in the middle of reading a collection of the Carnacki stories, but as soon as I was done, I got my trusty nook and opened up In Hero Years…I’m Dead.

I wasn’t disappointed. The book starts on a number of solid noir tropes, moves on to hit a number of superhero tropes, and then proceeds to keep sending the main character (and the reader) in a number of different directions before its all over. A couple of times I thought I saw where it was heading, only to be proven wrong. The story is about an unnamed protagonist who has been out of the superhero business for twenty years. He comes back to town to try to pick up the pieces of his life. From there, he’s drawn into a fast-paced collection of lies, deceit, optimism, hope, and sacrifice. The whole story is driven on emotion and feeling rather than logic, and I got swept up into the whole strange, wonderful world of it all. I spent the extra dollar to get the deluxe edition with his lengthy afterword discussing the creation of the book, and I was pleased to find that a lot of the details and feeling I noticed in the book were all intended.

The only downside is that there were a few more typos than I would have hoped for. I would get wrapped up in the story, and some missing word or errant punctuation would draw me out and slap my editor’s cap on my head. There were also a couple of times that I caught myself trying to figure out which heroes and villains were analogs of which popular comic book characters, which also distracted me. But I found myself taking any opportunity I could to sneak in a few more pages, so clearly these things didn’t distract me too terribly much.

Overall, if you want to support a writer trying a new business model, if you have an ebook reader (or are comfortable reading on a computer), and if you like gritty superhero stories packed with emotion and character, do yourself a favor and pick up In Hero Years.

The Adventure of the Blue Carbuncle (1892)

The Blue Carbuncle

The Blue Carbuncle

Want to read this along with me? This essay is part of The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes, published in 1892. I used the epub version found on Feedbooks.com.

It’s the start of the Christmas season, and every Christmas, I run into images of the Victorian ideal of Christmas, which inevitably slides into renditions, quotes, and readings from A Christmas Carol. People mention Scrooge and his ghosts, and hold that up as the ideal story of the holiday season. But through my life, my favorite Christmas story hasn’t been that Dickensian classic, but rather “The Adventure of the Blue Carbuncle.” Other Sherlockians might dismiss the story as one of the weaker cases in the book, but it has always held a special place in my heart, and I’ve read it dozens of times throughout my life. (And yet, I still notice little things each time I read it, like the fact that Holmes tends to crumple papers into a ball when he’s done reading them.)

This case starts off with a scenario in which a crime isn’t committed, and Watson specifically mentions three previous stories in which this is the case.1 Later we learn that a jewel theft is committed, but we’re starting to see Doyle draw connections between his own previous works and build this elaborate chronology around Holmes – even, as we’ve already seen, if it’s fraught with inconsistencies and conflicts.

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  1. “A Scandal in Bohemia,” “A Case of Identity,” and “The Man with the Twisted Lip,” specifically.

Should I sell the writing clogging up my hard drive?

Question_bookOne thing that comes as a consequence of long car trips is that I end up thinking about writing. As we drove back and forth from Tennessee and Georgia over Thanksgiving, I had a couple of ideas. The first was to resurrect a novel idea that I had a little over a year ago and go back to researching and plotting it. Since I have no idea if it’ll be a non-starter, I won’t go into that.

The other idea is to take some short stories and bits of microfiction I’ve collected over the years and sell them on the Internet.

As usual, as soon as I have an idea, the brain thief Chuck Wendig has already beaten me to the punch. However, he’s talking about something much more substantial than I am. A quick copy-and-paste of everything I would be compiling barely clocks in over 20k, and it’s a mishmash of old blog posts, professional wrestling essays, sci-fi, drama, humor, historical fantasy, fictionalized personal experiences, and other detritus from my head.

Basically, here’s what I’m thinking: If there’s interest in the stuff, and if people would be willing to pay .99 cents for it, I’ll pull it all together, polish it up, get it edited, find a decent looking cover, and sell it as an ebook for the Kindle, nook, iPad, and so on (basically, in .mobi, .epub, and .pdf formats).

If there’s interest in the stuff, but not enough to pay a buck, I’ll just compile it and give it away for free. I won’t polish it, edit it, or give it a cover – I’ll likely just stick it as a .zip file on the Free Stuff page.

So, please drop me a note here, on Facebook, on Twitter, through the contact page, or whatever. I’m okay if your answer is “No, not willing to pay a buck for that stuff, sorry” – I’m just trying to get an idea of a potential market.

Letter from Thailand

Thailand

Thailand

Earlier this year I asked some of my peers in the gaming industry to donate stuff to my cousin-in-law. He was looking for something a bit like classic D&D, but exploring some of the “hackability” of Fudge. I got a number of PDFs, as well as a lot of physical products at GenCon, which I finally got a chance to mail out a couple of weeks ago. On Tuesday, I got an email from Dave.

The package got here yesterday. You should have seen the looks on the faces of the Thai staff when I told them that my cousin and her husband send over the books to help the students enjoy learning English. We have our own English library here in the English Program at school and I told the librarian to keep the books safe and not to let them out of the library. I locked up the DM screen, map, graph paper and pens in my office desk. Today I showed the kids the treasure trove and they were in shock that someone in the USA would send them something. I had them practicing map making today and they were picking it up quick.

Gatecrasher is an amazing book, storyline and RPG. You must have been talking to Michelle as this RPG perfectly suits me. I read a few reviews and the purist’s don’t seem to like it. On the other hand after just giving it a quick run through I LOVE IT! The weirdness and wackiness balanced with a good sense of humor make this a great game. Please tell your friends, colleagues, and businesses who helped in this project thank you so much. I see the librarian is drafting a thank you letter and in the Thai way the big wigs will want to sign it before I send it to you. I will also get some pictures of the students and I using the material you sent so you can forward it to all involved.

I have a fudge dice roller on the laptop but Gatecrasher also has a percentile dice system that should be just fine. God I can’t wait to fire up a game. I’ve been saleing it to the girls as a form of the Twilight movie series and they are interested in trying it too. I’ll let you know how it goes and thank you so much, God I’m pumped!

I’m glad I was able to be even a small part of this project.

The Man with the Twisted Lip (1891)

The Man with the Twisted Lip

The Man with the Twisted Lip

Want to read this along with me? This essay is part of The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes, published in 1892. I used the epub version found on Feedbooks.com.

Now we come to a story about opium addiction and opium dens, that strange oddity of prim and proper Victorian society. Opium dens were dirty, terrible places (much like crack houses are today), but yet they were perfectly legal for many years – in fact, many people at the time didn’t even think that opium was addictive. The scene with Watson in the den trying to recover his friend is fascinating, and Doyle (through Watson) doesn’t flinch in his unrelenting opinions of these drug dens and the effects of opium on its users. Inevitably, one has to draw a parallel between this den and Holmes’ own addictions, and Holmes even remarks on it himself.1

Aside from the opium den, though, this story is unusual and interesting in a couple of other ways. We’re treated to a rare stretch of Watson’s own adventuring outside of Holmes, and he proves to be as capable and forthright alone as he is with his friend when he goes without a moment’s hesitation into a drug den to retrieve his patient. The story also never once strays into Baker Street, and we get a glimpse into Watson’s domestic life, something only implied or hinted at previously.2

The story centers on disguise. Although Holmes himself is in disguise only briefly (and, admittedly, his transformation for Watson borders a bit on the fantastic for my tastes), Holmes’ knowledge of stagecraft is instrumental in solving the case, and we are given some interesting details about the craft of disguise in the Victorian age. Interestingly, many Sherlockians over the ages have considered the concept of a beggar making that much money to be unrealistic, but recent studies have shown that entertaining and deformed beggers today can pull down quite a bit of money, so in this Doyle is way ahead of his time.

We meet another policeman, Inspector Bradstreet, and learn that some of the policemen actually respect Holmes and his work.

We also get another peek into Watson and Holmes’ relationship:

You have a grand gift of silence, Watson,” said he. “It makes you quite invaluable as a companion. ‘Pon my word, it is a great thing for me to have someone to talk to, for my own thoughts are not over-pleasant.”

There’s another scene that I find a bit unusual for the canon, however. It’s when Holmes is talking with Mary St. Clair, and she is convinced that her husband is still alive, based on her intuition. Holmes responds with

I have seen too much not to know that the impression of a woman may be more valuable than the conclusion of an analytical reasoner. And in this letter you certainly have a very strong piece of evidence to corroborate your view.”

If Holmes is serious, he’s admitting that women’s intuition is actually a valid tool in investigation, which seems contrary to most every axiom he’s mentioned thus far. I’m more inclined to think he’s being sarcastic here, but if so, it’s a very subtle indication that he’s sometimes frustrated with his clientele. Besides, he solves the mystery by making a pillow fort and smoking a lot, so Holmes is certainly racking up eccentricities in this story.

I know I’ve mentioned a lot of continuity controversies in the canon so far, but this story contains one that seems to get a lot of play in the Sherlockian community, and yet I don’t think it’s a big deal at all. It all stems from one line, spoken my Watson’s wife:

“Now, you must have some wine and water, and sit here comfortably and tell us all about it. Or should you rather that I sent James off to bed?”

“James,” here, is clearly a reference to Watson, introduced in A Study in Scarlet as Dr. John Watson. There has been a lot of discussion about who James is and how he figures into the canon – so much so that the topic warrants a separate article in The New Annotated Sherlock Holmes, Vol. 1. And yet, I always just assumed that “James” was just a nickname for John. I guess everyone has their own opinions on what’s controversial.

  1. One thing I’ve noticed on this read-through is that Holmes doesn’t actually deny using opium – he just implies that he isn’t. Given Holmes’ propensity for wordplay now and then, I’m curious if that omission is intentional.
  2. Although, again, Watson refers to Mary as only “my wife.” He hasn’t once mentioned his wife’s name since the story he met her in!

Review of Killer Thriller

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Full disclosure: I worked with Tony Lee on the Know Your Role RPG, and we’ve been acquaintances through the gaming industry for years. I also got a free copy of the game from Tony.

Horror games are awesome. The psychological conflicts can be engaging, and the tense cat-and-mouse between mortal and monster can be tense and exciting. But sometimes, you just want to rack up the highest body count as quickly as possible in the tradition of B-movie slasher flicks.

Welcome to Killer Thriller.

The game only uses six-sided dice. When you start reading the game, you realize that this is a satirical beer-and-pretzel game. The player characters are known as “Victims,” and the players need to make three of them before the game starts. Each character has three Inabilities: Unwise (roll to make a sensible decision), Unluck (roll to avoid unfortunate coincidence), and Undone (roll to keep your character’s cool). The player rolls 2d6, and tries to fail against their Inability in order to do something smart, lucky, or sane. Damage comes off of a character’s Unharm. Each character also has a stereotype, which is… well, stereotypical. Once per game, they can automatically succeed in one thing that relates to their stereotype. There are advantages and disadvantages, but that’s only for “advanced” characters.

In an interesting twist, whenever a Victim dies, that character’s max Unharm gets added to the next Victim’s Unharm. When the player gets to the last character with the collective Unharm of all the previous Victims, that Victim is considered to be the Last Survivor. On the other hand, Monsters don’t roll their own Inabilities against Victims except when the player has a Last Survivor, reflecting that Monsters are terrifyingly efficient until the final few victims are left, when they suddenly become bumbling idiots.

The rest of the book covers different kinds of Monsters you can create, some GM advice, two quick adventures, character cards, and an afterword.

It’s less than 30 pages, but the game is only three bucks. For a fast-paced night of light-hearted murder, it can be a lot of fun. Check it out.