Want to read this along with me? This essay is part of The Hound of the Baskervilles, published in 1902. I used the epub version found on Feedbooks.com.
Watson’s intelligence is displayed inconsistently in this story, and is best summarized by Holmes himself.
“I am bound to say that in all the accounts which you have been so good as to give of my own small achievements you have habitually underrated your own abilities. It may be that you are not yourself luminous, but you are a conductor of light. Some people without possessing genius have a remarkable power of stimulating it. I confess, my dear fellow, that I am very much in your debt.”
Watson makes some deductions which turn out to be wrong, and the sarcasm from Holmes above is his reward for such. The scene with the walking stick is similar to the scene with the hat in “The Blue Carbuncle,” but instead of Watson seeing much and admitting he doesn’t see anything, this time he dives right into the bad deductions. He gets better throughout the story, especially when he is left on his own in Baskerville Hall and gathers some good information about the people around him. He even manipulates Frankland in much the same way that Holmes manipulates the goose vender in “Carbuncle.” But despite it all, his contributions toward collecting the data necessary for the case are diminished under Holmes’ deductions derived from that same data.
In fact, one of the most interesting things about the narrative structure of Hound is that Holmes is actually missing for several chapters, leaving Watson fully in the front of the story. Although the novel ends up taking many of Watson’s observations and showing them to be incorrect (which is, to be fair, an important part of the mystery novel structure), this is the story in which I really began to believe that Watson was talented as a detective in his own right. If you break each deduction made in the story down, some of Holmes’ initial deductions are wrong while several of Watson’s are later verified, even though all the ones Watson directly tells Holmes are dismissed. Regardless of his success or failure as a detective, though, he is peerless as a man of action and integrity here; he is brave and loyal throughout the book, not only to Holmes but to Sir Charles Baskerville.
Doyle not only leaves Watson alone for several chapters, but he changes the formula up even more by framing some of the Watson-only chapters as letters and diary entries to give a little more insight into Watson’s own head. We learn that Watson isn’t a deep sleeper,1 and we can see that he is desperate for Holmes’ approval in his frequent requests for congratulations. We also learn that, while Watson has previously seemed inclined to at least consider supernatural options, he doesn’t see himself as a superstitious man, claiming that “but if I have one quality upon earth it is common sense.” There’s even a nice reference back to the very earliest part of their friendship in A Study in Scarlet:
“I can still remember your complete indifference as to whether the sun moved round the earth or the earth round the sun.”
But unlike Scarlet where Holmes is missing for the last half of the book, in this case Watson’s constant references to how his friend would handle things or making sure that he makes Holmes proud wonderfully manages to keep Holmes in the narrative even when he isn’t present. You never feel like it stops being a story about Holmes, because Watson always references or evokes Holmes. Even the act of framing some chapters as letters to Holmes keeps us grounded in the fact that Holmes is important to these events, and Watson’s tender references to his friend in those letters also reminds us of the special relationship the two men share.
And yet, when they are reunited in chapter twelve, Watson is furious with Holmes for using him. Holmes admits that Watson’s humanity and loyalty are sometimes inconvenient to his work.
“But why keep me in the dark?”
“For you to know could not have helped us and might possibly have led to my discovery. You would have wished to tell me something, or in your kindness you would have brought me out some comfort or other, and so an unnecessary risk would be run…”
This scene in chapter twelve is a great example showing that these two men have a real relationship – they fight, they argue, they insult and deride each other, and yet they care very much for each other, and are loyal to each other.
- This is in direct conflict with A Study in Scarlet where he says “I get up at all sorts of ungodly hours,” but supported by his comment in “The Speckled Band” where he says he is “regular in my habits.” It’s possible that as he recovered from his injuries in Afghanistan that he ended up becoming more of an early riser, but all of the statements taken at face value seem to contradict each other. ↩


